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some sort of wasted by ~immense-chagrin:iconimmense-chagrin:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


i'm not a fucking WRITER.

i'm just a girl
who hates herself
and everything she
says
does
writes
touches
thinks about.

i'm just a human
that makes a lot of
mistakes
food
money

and everything i do
is a complete waste of
time
breath
money
space.

i'm fucking flawed.
and i dont expect you
to tell me otherwise

sometimes
i just want to spend the day
alone
and tranquil
with drugs
or alcohol
or SOMETHING
and just be
some sort of wasted.

but instead
i'm wasting everything else.


everything you've just read
was a waste of our time.
©2007-2009 ~immense-chagrin
:iconimmense-chagrin:

Author's Comments

I don't like this.
And I think I made that very clear.


p.s. I don't mean all of this.
If you want the truth, i just like the title. : )

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:iconforget24:
~forget24 Jan 15, 2007, 7:45:30 AM
Yeah we are all flawed some more/less than otheres but the idea is you have to learn that nothing ever done is a waste! If i hadent sat here and read that i could of left this library earlier and got hit by a car or something! You Can never know what didn't happen so therefore nothing can be a waste!

Onto the poem its jagged and full of mild changes very flawed like a great poem has to be it shows your feelings but worse yet you don't apreciate it i think you should read it as if you didn't write it!
But most of all you should accept this :hug: :smooch: :glomp:

--
Hello or goodbye. Depending on the more suiting!
:iconimmense-chagrin:
~immense-chagrin Jan 15, 2007, 7:55:26 AM
you're sweet.
thank you.
you made me smile.

--
it's no mystery;
you should obviously go
before i break everything

you're always telling me
that you're dying to know
but you're not really listening.
:iconforget24:
~forget24 Jan 24, 2007, 5:49:06 AM
That is good!
You just gotta find a way to keep smiling we all do!
:hug:
:smooch:
:glomp:

--
Hello or goodbye. Depending on the more suiting!
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